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« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 20:16:57 PM » |
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do you know the difference between love and mercy? in this poem you're asking for mercy, not for love... and what is with your English? it sucks
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k_mihai
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« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2008, 20:27:08 PM » |
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i don`t like the poem as poetry very much, cause is more like prose, verses are too long etc
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« Reply #4 on: March 03, 2008, 21:39:48 PM » |
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please dont let her read it
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Does the walker choose the path? Or the path the walker?
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« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2008, 21:41:42 PM » |
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and what is with your English? it sucks yup, i agree... he used to know how to speak english...
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« Last Edit: March 03, 2008, 21:41:54 PM by stud »
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Some say the glass is half empty, some say the glass is half full, I say are you going to drink that?
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k_mihai
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« Reply #10 on: March 03, 2008, 22:39:08 PM » |
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and of writers
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« Reply #12 on: March 05, 2008, 09:22:29 AM » |
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« Reply #13 on: March 05, 2008, 09:27:21 AM » |
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that's what happens if he stop spamming .... he forgot how to speak English Damn right about it I shall spam IO forum more in the future.
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« Reply #14 on: March 05, 2008, 10:29:29 AM » |
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no, try to compliment on everything and not describe everything with really big words. And this --> Questions,questions and yet more questions and yet not a single answer to my questions MAN THAT WAS ERRIBLE. sorry but its the ruth, try and think about the reader actually reading this
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