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kingjohn
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« on: March 03, 2008, 15:27:57 PM »
This was written I think 6 years back to a girl I used to like but no longer, tell me what you think of it?

http://library.lovingyou.com/poetry/88/88284.shtml
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« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 20:16:57 PM »
do you know the difference between love and mercy? in this poem you're asking for mercy, not for love... and what is with your English? it sucks   *crazy*
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« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2008, 20:27:08 PM »
i don`t like the poem as poetry very much, cause is more like prose, verses are too long etc 

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« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2008, 20:30:47 PM »
IO is full of art critics  write write write write
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« Reply #4 on: March 03, 2008, 21:39:48 PM »
please dont let her read it  *xxx* wall
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« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2008, 21:41:42 PM »
Quote from: DJtomy on March 03, 2008, 20:16:57 PM
and what is with your English? it sucks   *crazy*

yup, i agree... he used to know how to speak english... *xxx*
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Some say the glass is half empty, some say the glass is half full, I say are you going to drink that? *beer*
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« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2008, 22:24:13 PM »
Quote from: stud on March 03, 2008, 21:41:42 PM
yup, i agree... he used to know how to speak english... *xxx*

that's what happens if he stop spamming .... he forgot how to speak English  *freak* *freak*
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« Reply #7 on: March 03, 2008, 22:26:10 PM »
*hahaha*
if that's so, i think i need to practice my english a bit more *freak* *easy* *Grin* i don't want to forget it *Grin*
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« Reply #8 on: March 03, 2008, 22:27:28 PM »
good idea  *ok* *ok* *ok* *ok*
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« Reply #9 on: March 03, 2008, 22:31:51 PM »
 *Grin* *Grin* *Grin*
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« Reply #10 on: March 03, 2008, 22:39:08 PM »
Quote from: makavelis on March 03, 2008, 20:30:47 PM
IO is full of art critics  write write write write

and of writers  *freak*
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« Reply #11 on: March 03, 2008, 22:42:16 PM »
I forgot that  *freak* *freak* .... good point  *hahaha*
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« Reply #12 on: March 05, 2008, 09:22:29 AM »
not nice?  wall wall wall  *cry* *cry* *cry*
Looks like I am not that romantic after all?  *sos* *sos* *sos* *sos*
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« Reply #13 on: March 05, 2008, 09:27:21 AM »
Quote from: makavelis on March 03, 2008, 22:24:13 PM
that's what happens if he stop spamming .... he forgot how to speak English  *freak* *freak*

Damn right about it  *ok* I shall spam IO forum more in the future.  *freak*
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« Reply #14 on: March 05, 2008, 10:29:29 AM »
Quote from: kingjohn on March 05, 2008, 09:22:29 AM
not nice?  wall wall wall  *cry* *cry* *cry*
Looks like I am not that romantic after all?  *sos* *sos* *sos* *sos*

no, try to compliment on everything and not describe everything with really big words.
And this -->  Questions,questions and yet more questions and yet not a single answer to my questions
MAN THAT WAS ERRIBLE. sorry *Smiley* but its the ruth, try and think about the reader actually reading this  *pardon*
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