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Author Topic: A Poem Or Letter to a girl I love  (Read 61638 times)
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kingjohn
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« on: October 26, 2007, 14:43:51 PM »

I have made this letter and I don't plan to send it. But here it is, what do u think? Please don't laugh at me ok.

Here it is.

Dear,
       XXXXXXXXXX
                  It has been a pleasure to know you while I was working at XXXX .Among all the girls I have met in my life, you are the kindest girl I met in my life. You are the prettiest girl I knew in my life. The reason I like you is not because of your beauty but your kindness. I know you do charity to help poor children and this has been an ambition of mine during childhood days which I forgot and I thank you for bringing back kindness into my life. I promise myself to do good things in honor of you regardless you love me or not. TO me you are more than someone I love, a teacher, a friend and a motivator. You have motivated me to do good things. I am not a good person, but everytime I think of the good things you do, I would like to change. I know you are a quiet, shy and homely girl. I can't speak mandarin well and I learned it to speak to you. You are the kindest girl I met in my life, no girl I knew in my life is even close to you. What I love about you is your kindness, you may not be the prettiest girl in the world, but you are the prettiest girl to me because you are kind, gentle , honest and caring. You are a girl that any guy would dream of.
A kind that will come only once in every million years. I helped my grandmother to clean up the house, I usually don't do that because I know you are kind and I want to learn to be kind, your kindness is like light to my life. I learn to cook because I know you like homely guys and I would also love to cook for the unfortunate people, I promise you this, if I am rich, I will promise myself to make sure I will always help those around me in your honor. I really love you,
how I wish I could wake up every morning with you beside me and I would cook you and your family breakfast, I love to cook and be a family man. I wish I could help clean your house and look after your parents when they are sick. It is said that if you love a woman, you will love their family too. I wish I could take care of them. If you do not like me I am still ok. I just want to be a friend who will help during happy and times of hardship. If you need any help including money I will help you. It is my honor to help a person as kind as you. The reason I do not go after you is because I want you to have a better guy than me who has more money than me and can bring you happyness. I am afraid I cannot live up to my promise of being a good guy. I rather lose you than to make you unhappy. Everything I do is in the interest of you. But I only want one thing from you is that I can be your friend when you need me. My love for you has no boundaries. I thought to myself if I really love you and I know I do. You have stolen my heart. I ask myself this, if one day there was an accident and you do not look pretty anymore would I still love you?  I thought hard and I told myself I would proudly go out and let everybody know I love you. Looks is only physical, but no one can ever take this away from you. Your kindness. I will love you no matter what happens.Your kindness and your smile will always light up the world of those unhappy and unfortunate people. I thank God for allowing me to meet you and thank you for teaching me kindness. Please take care of yourself.



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« Reply #1 on: October 26, 2007, 14:50:40 PM »

Too long to read, so please decide yourself: Serious discussions or Fan art?? (do you want a debate on this or you made this as a piece of art, just to exercise your literally skills). Anyway, no way General Talk!!  *hmm* *freak*
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« Reply #2 on: October 26, 2007, 14:53:53 PM »

Too long to read, so please decide yourself: Serious discussions or Fan art?? (do you want a debate on this or you made this as a piece of art, just to exercise your literally skills). Anyway, no way General Talk!!  *hmm* *freak*

neb; I recommend you read it... it's seriously amazing...

seriously, sweetneb, I haven't laughed so much in weeks!!!  *hahaha* *hahaha* *hahaha*
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« Reply #3 on: October 26, 2007, 14:55:21 PM »

neb; I recommend you read it... it's seriously amazing...

seriously, sweetneb, I haven't laughed so much in weeks!!!  *hahaha* *hahaha* *hahaha*

Maybe I should delete it, but it was to someone I like I wouldn't send to someone. Since this is general talk, I thought I can tell if I am good at expressing my feelings. Maybe I put at art, Neb? Hiske!! You laugh at me  *cry*  *cry* *cry*
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« Reply #4 on: October 26, 2007, 15:01:29 PM »

You repeat some words a bit too much *Tongue*... I think you should need to exercise your literally skills a bit more
Cheers *bear*
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« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2007, 15:06:52 PM »

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« Reply #6 on: October 26, 2007, 15:10:15 PM »

You repeat some words a bit too much *Tongue*... I think you should need to exercise your literally skills a bit more
Cheers *bear*

I will probably delete it later, I am sad over something and I know the girl likes me but I want her to have someone better than me so I am not going after her.  Anyway, I just wanted to share some of my life because I was quite bored. Anyway, I posted at the wrong forum so I will delete it later anyway.
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« Reply #7 on: October 26, 2007, 15:14:15 PM »

I will probably delete it later, I am sad over something and I know the girl likes me but I want her to have someone better than me so I am not going after her.  Anyway, I just wanted to share some of my life because I was quite bored. Anyway, I posted at the wrong forum so I will delete it later anyway.


why would you delete it? please don't! and seriously; if you need some advice; just ask *wink*
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« Reply #8 on: October 26, 2007, 15:16:37 PM »

why would you delete it? please don't! and seriously; if you need some advice; just ask *wink*

Because you laugh at it *hmm*
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« Reply #9 on: October 26, 2007, 15:36:17 PM »

why would you delete it? please don't! and seriously; if you need some advice; just ask *wink*

I just wanted to share with you. I am not asking for any advices. I don't need any :-) Anyway, to me that girl is really superb and is very kind, I seriously never met anyone as kind as her. So at least I met her before and I am contended in my life because I know kind girl like her exist because in the past yes there is girls that like me before but no one has come close to her as in kindness. I just admire her, really I do. I admire her for her charity works and stuff. She thought me how to care for others. As I said in the letter, if you love someone doesn't mean the person has to be yours. But I am thankful that I can learn how to care about people from her and to me that is a blessing. But I know you are all going to laugh at me.  *cry* *cry* *cry* Btw, can some mods delete this post for me? I can't find the delete button.
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« Reply #10 on: October 26, 2007, 15:55:15 PM »

Why don't you ask her for date?  Huh?
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« Reply #11 on: October 26, 2007, 16:09:58 PM »

@q-bura I want her to be with someone rich. I want her to have a good life. I may like her but I am also realistic. I want her to be with someone who can provide her with a very happy life. I am not too sure if I can be the man she wants. As I said earlier, I rather lose her than to see her unhappy but I will love her forever. I will always help her and even till I die I will help her if she needs anything be it money and I will gladly help her even if it's going to cost my own life(I think I would) But trust me, I really like her. My family background is not poor but I really think she is better off with other guys.
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« Reply #12 on: October 26, 2007, 16:12:41 PM »

who could possibly provide her with a happier life than the person who loves her so much?
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kingjohn
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« Reply #13 on: October 26, 2007, 16:21:21 PM »

who could possibly provide her with a happier life than the person who loves her so much?

Today this is just a letter, I will take my time to write a poem and tell me if it's romantic. I love writing poems. Not an expert at it. But pls don't laugh again at me  when I write it.  *cry* *cry* *cry*
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« Reply #14 on: October 26, 2007, 16:31:31 PM »

@q-bura I want her to be with someone rich. I want her to have a good life. I may like her but I am also realistic. I want her to be with someone who can provide her with a very happy life. I am not too sure if I can be the man she wants. As I said earlier, I rather lose her than to see her unhappy but I will love her forever. I will always help her and even till I die I will help her if she needs anything be it money and I will gladly help her even if it's going to cost my own life(I think I would) But trust me, I really like her. My family background is not poor but I really think she is better off with other guys.

That really sucks, KingJohn. Why would you be so full of it, that she doesn't deserve you? You have already shown that you have what it takes to adapt to her likings and needs. Stop shitting on yourself and go for her. Make her life worth it all!

 *rose* *rose*
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