Throne Hall>Capitulation>"capitulate from" and "capitulated from"
"from" needs to be replaced by "to" [incorrect preposition usage]
Town Hall>Economy>Lumber Mill>Description (click on image)>"constructions"
"constructions" needs to be replaced by "construction" [some English words are plural AND singular without requiring an "s"]
Town Hall>Economy>Depot>Description (click on image)>"whiney" AND "ox"
"whiney" needs to be replaced by "whinney" ;["whiney" is what u might call someone that posts here; "whinney" is one of the sounds a horse makes]
"ox" needs to be replaced by "oxen" [the plural of "ox" is "oxen"]
Town Hall>Economy>University>Description (click on image)>"After all your" AND "the civilized" AND "uncontrollable" AND "the nasty"
"After all your" needs to be replaced by "After all, your" [separate introductory exclamation from the sentence itself]
"the civilized" needs to be replaced by "civilized" [needless use of the article]
"uncontrollable" needs to be replaced by "an uncontrollable" [missing necessary article]
"the nasty" needs to be replaced by "a nasty" [specific article should be general]
Town Hall>Military>BARRACKS>Description (click on image)>"olive branches angels"
"olive branches angels " needs to be replaced by "olive branches and angels" [or something like "angels holding olive branches" or even "laurel wreathed angels"
]
Town Hall>Military>SHOOTING RANGE>Description (click on image)>"loosing"
"loosing" needs to be replaced by "losing" [loosing an arrow is correct, "loosing a finger" is just painful
]
Town Hall>Military>CAVALRY RANGE>Description (click on image)>"heftily" AND "terrific" AND "site" AND "hoofs" AND "the inevitable" AND "to sink down to the shoes" AND "to work together in the cavalry barracks" AND "revel sight"
"heftily" needs to be replaced by "heavily" [the adjectival form of "heft" is "hefty" not "heftily" which is beside the main point that heft/hefty does not apply to the type of armor whereas heavily does]
"terrific" needs to be replaced by "terrifying" [it may seem to be hypocritical of me, but "terrific" is only academically correct, the idiomatic use of "terrific" is a positive emotion when used as an adjective, not a negative emotion as you most likely prefer to use here, hence, "terrifying"]
"site" needs to be replaced by "sight" [a web page has no place on a medieval battlefield, even if the spell checker said it was ok]
"hoofs" needs to be replaced by "hooves" [plural of "hoof" is "hooves", it behooves you to correct this]
"the inevitable" needs to be replaced by "inevitable" [the article "the" is not needed]
"to sink down to the shoes" needs to be replaced by "sink into the shoes" ["to sink" is the infinitive tense, you want the present tense form "sink"; since the heart is inside the body, it sinks "into" the shoes. Similarly, things go "into" shoes. If you must use "down to", change "shoes" to "feet"]
"The heavy war horse and its rider are trained to work together in the cavalry barracks" needs to be replaced by "Here is where the heavy war horse and its rider are trained to work together". [as written it suggests that the horse and rider work together ONLY in the barracks]
"revel sight" needs to be replaced by "revel in the sight" [the expression lacks the preposition "in" and the article "the"]
Town Hall>Military>SIEGE WORKSHOP>Description (click on image)> "it will be" AND "it "machine-building"" AND "put together" AND "the access" AND "quite restricted" AND "deeps" AND "usual folks" AND "" AND ""
"it will be " needs to be replaced by "it is" [you want the future continuous aspect of "to be", "is", instead of the future tense "will be"]
"it "machine-building "" needs to be replaced by "it a "machine-building"" [missing an article for this noun]
"put together" needs to be replaced by "assemble" [putting the parts beside each other is not enough, hence, "assemble" is more accurate]
"the access" needs to be replaced by "access" [the article "the" is not needed]
"quite restricted" needs to be replaced by "restricted" [not only is "quite" redundant, it sounds like German is your first language]
"deeps" needs to be replaced by "depths" [deeps are found under mountains and waters, not in forests. Were you extrapolating from the expression "deep in the forest"? Don't, extrapolation in a fracked up language like English is risky]
"usual folks" needs to be replaced by "ordinary folk", "plain folk" or "folk" ["usual" is not synonomous in with "ordinary" in the context of people; the word "folk" is inherently plural]
Town Hall>Military>FORTRESSES>Description (click on image)> "fortress�." AND "realms Version 4" AND "the production"
"fortress�. The" needs to be replaced by "fortress, a" [this will connect the phrase with the sentence it belongs to"; the indefinite article "a" should be used"
"realms Version 4" needs to be replaced by "Version 4 realms" [in English adjectives come first]
"the production" needs to be replaced by "production" [unnecessary use of the article "the"]
Town Hall>Military>RESERVE>Description (click on image)> "as much as possible resources"
"as much as possible resources" needs to be replaced by "as many resources as possible" [looks like it was translated from German]