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« on: March 30, 2008, 06:23:41 AM » |
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"Never Ending Cycle"
Dreams of you filter through my soul, a twinkle, a spark of light in your eyes. As far away as I am You are only a half a breath away (from me)
Your loving warmth,is like the soft touch of the autumn sun (it reminds me of you) The Rose petal, is that of your gentle Love. ( I miss you) A blush, a sigh of relief, Just a slight touch of your hand, sends shivers up and down my spine.
If only you knew, we could make sweet melodies As you wach the sun rise in the east I sit as it fades into the west.
Such beauty, on a never ending cycle, Day in , day out, time passes As my thoughts of you, Always stay the same. Written by: NEPENTHE
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« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2008, 21:31:55 PM » |
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I stood shaking, like I was hanging from the rail in a subway. The Earth moved beneath my feet, as the sun dipped behind a cloud. Total eclipse, darkness in the sky.
Fluorescent lights cascading of the freshly polished flooring. I slide as if I was on ice, the sleekness is a mirage. Mirrors on the walls, a portrait of self in minds eye.
incessant sounds of grandeur pierce the underlying terraces Outspoken peoples infuriate the intellects disposition It is not what is said, but how you say it.
Continuous patronage unfolds within the unified communities. rumors spoken without sound, Heard like the trees tapping on the windows, It only hurts, When it keeps you awake.
by NEPENTHE
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« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2008, 21:35:17 PM » |
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Fuel
Gimme fuel Gimme fire Gimme that which I desire
Turn on, I see red Adrenaline crash and crack my head Nitro junkie, paint me dead And I see red
One hundred plus through black and white War horse War head Fuck em, man White knuckle tight Through black and white
Oh, on I burn Fuel is pumping engines Burning hard Loose and clean
Oh, and on I burn Churning my direction Quench my thirst with gasoline
So gimme fuel Gimme fire Gimme that which I desire
Turn on beyond the bone Swallow future, spit out home Burn your face upon the chrome
Take the corner, join the crash Headlights Headlines Another junkie lives too fast
Yeah Lives way too fast,...lives too fast..., ...lives too fast...,...too fast...,...too fast...
Oh, on I burn Fuel is pumping engines Burning hard, loose and clean
Oh, and on I burn Turning my direction Quench my thirst with gasoline
So gimme fuel Gimme fire Gimme that which I desire
Oh Gimme fuel Gimme fire My desire
Oh, on I burn Fuel is pumping engines Burning hard, loose and clean
On I burn Churning my direction Quench my thirst with gasoline
Gimme fuel Gimme fire Gimme that which I desire
On I burn
written by:Metallica
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« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2008, 22:18:35 PM » |
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as usual KoSac you have nothing original to say. you continually Plagerize from others creativeness.
though I use the name Pygmilian in here Nepenthe is my proffesional non de plume.
and By the way Al Bunday is just a character speaking the words of the many writers for that show.
Please comeup with something useful instead of the many reruns you are so lost on
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« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2008, 22:43:55 PM » |
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« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2008, 22:53:58 PM » |
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"There is so much that I wanna say to you but there's a show coming on that I wanna watch."
Al Bundy
I have seen Metallica in concert 21 times and still think they are one of the greatest bands. and yes their lyrics are second to none.
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« Reply #6 on: April 02, 2008, 22:58:13 PM » |
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hmm,it seems you know what are you talking about...sorry for spamming this topic,i'll be back with something really smart.... and i mean it really smart,written by myself,because it is easy to tell something smart using someone other's words.
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« Reply #7 on: April 02, 2008, 23:15:24 PM » |
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"DREAMS OR REALITY"
Lying here on my bed, my mind wanders off. Suddenly I'm meandering through an empty field, My pace quickens. I'm moving faster and faster, rolling like a river, around trees, over rocks, under fallen trees; Boom smack!!!
I'm awake, to find myself on the floor, Blood streaming from my head. Dreams to real to be dreams.
By Nepenthe
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« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2008, 15:40:21 PM » |
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The fact is that there is no point is coming here and post how smart a person or another can be, this has nothing to do with competition but only a wish to share feelings and try to makes other people experiance something true and deep.
Whatever you think a prose is good or bad, there is no interest in judging them if you keep in mind each of us will read them regards our own living experiance. There is no bad poetry, just prose your experiance doesn't allow you to appreciate, there is no shame in that since everyone is different (and thanks god) but the fact you don't like a thing or another doesn't mean its unlikable. Intelligence has nothing to do in here.
Anyway it is quite strange you don't feel concerned by any of them, especially the first one since everyone has experianced such feelings a day or another and from me writing such words and suceed in making them a faithfull image of the feelings we want to represent isn't an easy exercice and ask a certain humility some people shoold reconsider..
I do like them all even if its obvious those art writings are very personal, if you ask me my favorite is the second you've posted Nepenthe. The fact you involve yourself in each of them add in their strengh, because you take the risk to open yourself to others, only a brainless person could not be sensitive when in front of an open heart.
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« Reply #9 on: April 12, 2008, 21:34:37 PM » |
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"FROM ABOVE"
Flying high above the big blue ball, I can see white puffy shapeless objects drift by me, Abstract green, brown, red and yellow trees flow together. A perfect picture of peacefulness, Yet a more careful look into the in habitants, Reveals an insecure, wild Facsimile of a metiorite storm in space.
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